2012년 1월 11일 수요일

Do you believe magic?? Anarasumanara


Q. stories??
i'm very happy.......just...because
when i seat in my chair there was a 10.000w. for that money, i can buy a food to eat for 1 week.......
so i took the money.......than i heard something about....."a cheeky fellow..." But i believe that the money is not durty,  just...i'm dirty.....just.i want to believe like that...
썸네일
i'm having a hard time.........i don't \have a money, my mother died early and...my father? he ran away......
besides, i want to follow 1 person's life...named"na il deong"
he studies well(he is on a first floor in the class), he's father has lots of money and he has normal family....he has all of the thing that i want to have.
Q. Do you like the character??
I like the character because....the character tells me what is so sad about......Also she compare with others lives..... Lastly they are all pretty and handsome^^ i like na il doeng the most.Because he seems like a real person. And it's cute that he love...
Q. if you score 1~10 what grades are you going to give??
썸네일well.............i'm going to give 8. Because this story is sad and feel me....sad....
they drew the character well and the story is really exciting.....
do you know why i  -2 points? because some of the part doesn't make sense.....
So i hope you read this book.........

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  1. I like this webtoon and the review would have been fine if it hadn't been for the horribly excessive punctuation. Why would you use so many periods? Once or twice they may have worked but using them so much starts making it look irritating and makes me wonder if you are unsure of what you are writing.

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